Der Über Mormon few

[SixPackBack]

This should make the bitches fizz and the jokers drink.:rockon:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYrv-MhvTwc

[carver]

let me know what ya think!

[Sidewinder]

omg what am i on about???

[carver]

omg what am i on about???

i was struggling to understand myself

[Sidewinder]

i was struggling to understand myself

must mean that i got a good deal on that crack then

[Thani-B]

Boring.. :yawn:

[beyond]

Cool vid... nice sound track :)

[R6_kid]

omg what am i on about???

I think 'what are you on?' is probably a more relevant question! :whistle:

[bogan]

omg what am i on about???

fuck ill say, more fun than a crf450, im thinking not:yawn:, take it over a few doubles and a whoop section and maybe ill reconsider.

[Sidewinder]

I think 'what are you on?' is probably a more relevant question! :whistle:
i remember being on you that one specail night big G

[007XX]

let me know what ya think!

1) Sidewinder needs to articulate a little more :)

2) I looove the new look for the Transalp...quite sexy despite the bulbous look of the front light.

3) really enjoyed the composition of your vid, choice of music, and I thought the peep of the gorgeous countryside was a nice touch.

4) The rider's perspective could have used being a little less fuzzy perhaps?

5) I almost felt like it was a little long, but then, the skid at the end made it worth it :D

All in all, I enjoyed it...and I reckon you guys are getting better at this :rockon: Keep it up!

[Sidewinder]

fuck ill say, more fun than a crf450, im thinking not:yawn:, take it over a few doubles and a whoop section and maybe ill reconsider.

now theres an idea for next time:bash:

[Sidewinder]

1) Sidewinder needs to articulate a little more :)

2) I looove the new look for the Transalp...quite sexy despite the bulbous look of the front light.

3) really enjoyed the composition of your vid, choice of music, and I thought the peep of the gorgeous countryside was a nice touch.

4) The rider's perspective could have used being a little less fuzzy perhaps?

5) I almost felt like it was a little long, but then, the skid at the end made it worth it :D

All in all, I enjoyed it...and I reckon you guys are getting better at this :rockon: Keep it up!

what ya mean by that??
im camera shy:crazy::crazy::crazy:

[Paul_C]

I liked it.

[bogan]

what ya mean by that??
im camera shy:crazy::crazy::crazy:

bit more confidence always looks good on camera, looked a bit like you were hiding behind the bike there.
Had some decent camera work for the rest of the vid, a tad long for my taste, and a bit lacking in tech specs, but thats just me.

[Quasievil]

Icehouse was good.

[Sidewinder]

Icehouse was good.

so was the pub half way

[ManDownUnder]

Seriously - make notes on what you're going to say (which I think you did)... and say it out loud... on your own in a room where no-one can hear you.

Make it interesting, inflection in your voice - engage the audience... because the intro killed it.

The rest I quite enjoyed.

[sinfull]

Make it interesting, inflection in your voice - engage the audience... because the intro killed it.

Yeah next time ya wanna have a translappa do the intro !!!

[bogan]

Seriously - make notes on what you're going to say (which I think you did)... and say it out loud... on your own in a room where no-one can hear you.

Make it interesting, inflection in your voice - engage the audience... because the intro killed it.

The rest I quite enjoyed.

agreed, notes at most, definetly not a script though, you cud try just going for a fang on it get off, spout whatever shit comes to mind

[Sidewinder]

Yeah next time ya wanna have a translappa do the intro !!!

yea i just needed some piss and i would of been fine, but always ride sober.......

[Sidewinder]

agreed, notes at most, definetly not a script though, you cud try just going for a fang on it get off, spout whatever shit comes to mind

yea bascily what ever shit did just come to mind tho

[98tls]

Seriously - make notes on what you're going to say (which I think you did)... and say it out loud... on your own in a room where no-one can hear you.

Make it interesting, inflection in your voice - engage the audience... because the intro killed it.

The rest I quite enjoyed. What he said sort of,fwiw pretty well done,clicked the go button thinking "here we go" but to be honest watched it till the end,nice bike,nice roads,nice riding,not to mention being an old cunt love Icehouse.To sum up 7/10
.Well done.

[bogan]

yea bascily what ever shit did just come to mind tho

ah well, you can only get better from here:2thumbsup:2thumbsup lucky buggers getting to test all these new bikes

[Insanity_rules]

omg what am i on about???

You tell us and we'll all know!

[ManDownUnder]

agreed, notes at most, definetly not a script though
Exactly right. Know what your going to say, and say what you know. Don't do it word for word though - that just doesn't work, and it's hard work.


you cud try just going for a fang on it get off, spout whatever shit comes to mind

Na - That takes a lot of practice to attempt, and even then you need to hit your marks - topic areas to cover, order of presentation and wrap up/call to action at the end of it.

"Having a go" comes across as exactly that - which is what we saw.

[paddy]

let me know what ya think!

1) Firstly, I love the head wobble right after the skid at the end. Brilliant.

2) I think you guys are actually quite good a making these things. The framing is good, the tracking shots are set up well. The transitions are excellent. The overall feel is good too. There are a couple of things that let it down a little though: Camera stability. You should consider buying a HEAVY tripod. And the dialogue at the beginning. I think you make good directors/cameramen but you definitely not actors or script writers. Either work on or ditch the dialogue. It definitely takes away from the rest. Having said that, Carver seemed fairly natural on camera in the two talking segments towards the end.

3) I know you guys seem to cop a lot of flack on KB and I don't really know you from a bar of soap, but with the exception of the beginning I actually enjoyed watching that. Thanks. (It helps that I am trying to figure out how to ride on gravel at the moment - you should consider some instructional videos. Maybe something like MCN on YouTube - if I'm remembering the acronym right.)

P.

[paddy]

Exactly right. Know what your going to say, and say what you know. Don't do it word for word though - that just doesn't work, and it's hard work.



Na - That takes a lot of practice to attempt, and even then you need to hit your marks - topic areas to cover, order of presentation and wrap up/call to action at the end of it.

"Having a go" comes across as exactly that - which is what we saw.

+1

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[bogan]

Exactly right. Know what your going to say, and say what you know. Don't do it word for word though - that just doesn't work, and it's hard work.



Na - That takes a lot of practice to attempt, and even then you need to hit your marks - topic areas to cover, order of presentation and wrap up/call to action at the end of it.

"Having a go" comes across as exactly that - which is what we saw.

hmm, yeh good point, though having a fang beforehand may give you confidence/settle the nerves so a prepared dialogue will come across better

[ManDownUnder]

hmm, yeh good point, though having a fang beforehand may give you confidence/settle the nerves so a prepared dialogue will come across better

Oh shit yes - within reason it'd help the spontenaity and excitement of it - all engages the audience. Too much would push the presenter into "uber exited" though - beyond professional into bouncy and silly.

[SixPackBack]

Boring.. :yawn:

Didn't make you fizz sweetheart?...........Ask Dr Carver for an appointment, sure he will take you to heaven and back :love:

[The Stranger]

i was struggling to understand myself

You're a biker, that's to be expected and nothing to worry about.

[vifferman]

Yeah, what they said. :yes:
Here's some general guidelines:
- Don't include footage that's crap (like the out-of-focus bit) and hope it'll be OK. Be ruthless and ditch it.
- For the speaking bits, do several takes. If they're all crap, you could at least splice the footage or out-takes together in an amusing way.
- Avoid repetition: you've lots of similar shots, where the camera angles are similar, the bike's doing the same things (going around a coupe of curves), and it's kinda same-same.
- The same thing applies with "the camera lovingly caressing the bike" : it's the same panning-down-the-right-side-of-the-bike thing. Show us more of the bike (like the left side!) Emphasize the details/features you liked or didn't.

But overall, it was good. Ish. Keep at it, guys!

[carver]

Yeah, what they said. :yes:
Here's some general guidelines:
- Don't include footage that's crap (like the out-of-focus bit) and hope it'll be OK. Be ruthless and ditch it.
- For the speaking bits, do several takes. If they're all crap, you could at least splice the footage or out-takes together in an amusing way.
- Avoid repetition: you've lots of similar shots, where the camera angles are similar, the bike's doing the same things (going around a coupe of curves), and it's kinda same-same.
- The same thing applies with "the camera lovingly caressing the bike" : it's the same panning-down-the-right-side-of-the-bike thing. Show us more of the bike (like the left side!) Emphasize the details/features you liked or didn't.

But overall, it was good. Ish. Keep at it, guys!

cheers, i like what you say because it has reason and depth to it

[Slicksta]

cheers, i like what you say because it has reason and depth to it

I hate to say this so soon but its my favourite vid from season 2

[Thani-B]

Didn't make you fizz sweetheart?...........Ask Dr Carver for an appointment, sure he will take you to heaven and back :love:

Too bad he's gay then isnt it lol

[007XX]

what ya mean by that??
im camera shy:crazy::crazy::crazy:


awwww...you poor wee sausage! Harden up ya big pansie :D


Didn't make you fizz sweetheart?...........Ask Dr Carver for an appointment, sure he will take you to heaven and back :love:

Ok, I so do not want to know anymore thank you :sick:

However...Carver in a lab coat?...hmmmm, that has potential :rofl:

[serious4]

So how many times did you go over the same bit of road? I'm thinking it probably got as boring to ride as it did to watch. :zzzz:

Good editing and camera work just a bit drawn-out for my short attention span.

Top effort on getting a new bike to test.