This is what happens when Luke gets bored

[lukemc1878]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Px1_oNjpP9I

I decided I would make an intro for my future videos

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this is pretty low quality so feel free to rip in to it on here but also give feedback on how I can improve it criticism is always welcome :Playnice:

[ZeroIndex]

Could just be me, but a catchier tune (or at least starting the song later in the track) and some firmer ground to walk on would make a big improvement (looking down every couple of steps kinda throws it off)

[ital916]

Video needed girls or a bike.

[BoristheBiter]

Could just be me, but a catchier tune (or at least starting the song later in the track) and some firmer ground to walk on would make a big improvement (looking down every couple of steps kinda throws it off)

Needs a spacesuit.

I looks like he is walking back to his spacecraft from an old Star Trek episode.

[ZeroIndex]

Needs a spacesuit.

I looks like he is walking back to his spacecraft from an old Star Trek episode.
so, so true

[cheshirecat]

bit of colour correction and grading would help, but has potential

[unstuck]

My mother always told me "If you have not got anything nice to say, do not say anything". But I have never listened to her. :no:
That was utter crap.:facepalm:

[EJK]

<img src="http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/617/851/56d.gif" />

[lukemc1878]

My mother always told me "If you have not got anything nice to say, do not say anything". But I have never listened to her. :no:
That was utter crap.:facepalm:

ok then, were do you think it needs improving?

[lukemc1878]

<img src="http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/617/851/56d.gif" />

you shouldnt have expected anything good XD

[SMOKEU]

Get a couple of crack whores to lick each other out on the back of a Ducati 1199 and you might have a half decent video.

[SMOKEU]

you shouldnt have expected anything good XD

Oh, and quoting embedded images will get you a good :bash: :spanking:

[oneblackflag]

Get a couple of crack whores to lick each other out on the back of a Ducati 1199 and you might have a half decent video.

:killingme Cheap to set up...

[Berries]

:killingme Cheap to set up...
Chch = crack whores.

Always has, always will.

[lukemc1878]

Chch = crack whores.

Always has, always will.

just go down manchester street they are everywhere

[BoristheBiter]

ok then, were do you think it needs improving?

Ok,

1) have the camera pointed at a bike,
2) make it early morning so you get the sunrise. (in front of bike)
2) the ground can be on a hill, but walk straight ahead without looking at the ground,
3) get some good looking riding gear,
4) get some hot chick to hold your helmet (no pun intended) or starting the bike while you walk to it.

And do a reverse one for after the ride.

[Jay GTI]

Feedback: Slower, more deliberate movements, makes you look more confident (you want to look like you know you're the fastest rider on the planet but don't care). Boris has covered a lot of what I would say, I don't necessarily think you need the bike in the shot, but don't walk back to the camera, walk closely past it (you can edit out the camera turn off).

Has potential, just needs a polish.

[F5 Dave]

ok then, were do you think it needs improving?
The subject matter, the composition. . . The point?

Why do people think they look cool? Cause we don't. Well you don't. I have minions to tell me I'm cool.

Maybe you should consider joining The Vision. Do you like pizza crust?

[Tazz]

Good effort man. I couldn't negotiate that hill half as good as you in that state (you were drunk right?) :bleh:


The subject matter, the composition. . . The point?

Why do people think they look cool? Cause we don't. Well you don't. I have minions to tell me I'm cool.

Maybe you should consider joining The Vision. Do you like pizza crust?

Cheesy crust?

[EJK]

Here is a constructful feedback. If that will be your intro video to all your future blogs, I'd recommend shortning it down to 10 seconds or less or so.

Not everybody is patient enough to watch lengthy intros. Hell, I'm not even patient enough to watch a 15 seconds commercial!

[varminter]

I'm sorry, no offence intended, most of us, including me and you, are just not interesting to others. Why would you think you are?

[F5 Dave]

Part of the'me' generation. Will be a genuine shock that the world doesn't have the same adoration that mummy does.

[BoristheBiter]

I'm sorry, no offence intended, most of us, including me and you, are just not interesting to others. Why would you think you are?

Yep, I've got hours of cam footage, including when we did the Baja peninsula, and apart form the crashes, and there are a few, is just not that interesting.

[Grashopper]

I like the idea and the video, but that song is horrible. It needs something like this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LRLdhFVzqt4

And what Jay GTI and Boris said, minus the girl...

[lukemc1878]

thank you all for the great feedback, once I get my ZZR 400 I will remake this and will take what you guys have said on board, I really appreciate all your comments and I must say, some of the criticism made me laugh (not saying any names) when it is done and dusted I will post it on here and you guys can give your opinions on it again :woohoo:

[ZeroIndex]

This guy always cracked me up... also, the intro is fairly good


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NJoG9DYLDn0

[lukemc1878]

[QUOTE=ZeroIndex;1130675299]This guy always cracked me up... also, the intro is fairly good

haha awesome, I might actually record my motorcycle lesson and test if I am allowed

[Owl]

"This is what happens when Luke gets bored"

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Luke bores the fuck out of everyone else?:bleh:

[Berries]

I might actually record my motorcycle lesson and test if I am allowed
Would love to watch that.