I could use some feedback

[PanicRevv]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_OZKYl6Ko0g

My entry for the Vurbmoto FMF War Machines Edit contest. First year doing this, would appreciate some feedback to help me improve my videos in the future. Thanks!

[98tls]

No idea about editing etc but enjoyed the clip mate...awesome.

[ellipsis]

No idea about editing etc but enjoyed the clip mate...awesome.


...^^^...wot e sed...

[Ulsterkiwi]

I used to think I made video clips made from footage of my trips with mates, now I see what I am actually doing is micro-surgery with a chain saw and foisting the audiovisual equivalent of Frankenstein's Monster on the world on a regular basis.
Love your work mate, would get my vote.

One sequence were you have the crowd waving as the rider goes past, can that be done with the rider either:
doing a jump
or a powerslide

as they go past the people?

Just a thought :msn-wink:

[AllanB]

Great work. Nothing to improve.

Don't fall into the typical motorcycle video pitfall of having it overlaid with some thrash-racket of music. Me I want to hear the bikes.

Very much liked the drone getting killed. Fucking drones.

[nzspokes]

The woops section reminded me I need to take a couple of clicks of my comp damping. Needs more 2 smokes.

[pzkpfw]

You need to put the microphone closer to the speaker.


Other than that, dunno if I've seen "better" from "professionals".