NOW - New Ordered World

[mashman]

I'm done... After 5 - 6 weeks of rewrites I realise that I'm wholly too close to the subject. Groans at the ready folks. NOW is here

I need help, aha I know, but the site needs a set of fresh perspectives, a lighter touch, to make more sense etc... and the subject is huge in its own way. To that end if there are any folk on here that understand the idea and would like to contribute their own ideas, obliterate my pages with page rewrites, site colours etc... then I'll be more than happy to post them up. It may go nowhere, it may go somewhere and from a selfish perspective it's almost a weight off to finally get it out in the open, oooo er, even in its limited form. I can extend it with sub menu items etc... but in 2 weeks time I'm going to send it out to every political and media related email address I can find. If you have any lists of email addresses, please drop me a PM ta.

The site needs a touch that I don't have and I know that there are those of you out there that do, so contribute or not, it's up to you...

NOW Stupid, not NWO...

[speights_bud]

I opened the page and saw blah blah blah big blocks of text & couldn't be arsed reading into to find out the few basic essential points of what the link was actually all about, so if i cant be arsed why would a political person give any time to bother deciphering it? clicking around i did see something about less law etc which would put most of the politicians out of work so they wont be interested... my 2c

[The Singing Chef]

I'm done... After 5 - 6 weeks of rewrites I realise that I'm wholly too close to the subject. Groans at the ready folks. NOW is here

I need help, aha I know, but the site needs a set of fresh perspectives, a lighter touch, to make more sense etc... and the subject is huge in its own way. To that end if there are any folk on here that understand the idea and would like to contribute their own ideas, obliterate my pages with page rewrites, site colours etc... then I'll be more than happy to post them up. It may go nowhere, it may go somewhere and from a selfish perspective it's almost a weight off to finally get it out in the open, oooo er, even in its limited form. I can extend it with sub menu items etc... but in 2 weeks time I'm going to send it out to every political and media related email address I can find. If you have any lists of email addresses, please drop me a PM ta.

The site needs a touch that I don't have and I know that there are those of you out there that do, so contribute or not, it's up to you...

NOW Stupid, not NWO...

Maybe some more visual aids wouldn't go astray, even just a picture of something vaugely resembling what you are talking about as it is a lot of text.

I opened the page and saw blah blah blah big blocks of text & couldn't be arsed reading into to find out the few basic essential points of what the link was actually all about, so if i cant be arsed why would a political person give any time to bother deciphering it? clicking around i did see something about less law etc which would put most of the politicians out of work so they wont be interested... my 2c

Yea I had the same problem, doesn't help that I have been playing Nintendo64 for the last 6 hours either. Although I think that more Politically minded people are used to reading more information and lots of text?

[Subike]

Agree with the second post, read a little of the first page,
boring as, nothing new here,
also not exciting

[speights_bud]

Maybe some more visual aids wouldn't go astray, even just a picture of something vaugely resembling what you are talking about as it is a lot of text.



Yea I had the same problem, doesn't help that I have been playing Nintendo64 for the last 6 hours either. Although I think that more Politically minded people are used to reading more information and lots of text?

Yea, i drove 4 hours this afternoon so pretty similar frame of mid, though politically minded people probably used to reading lots of information it'd probably mean they are less interested as its too much like hard work

[Subike]

Sorta sumthin like this


What will this website try to convey?
It's pretty straight forwards really and whilst it's easier to communicate verbally,
it's nigh on impossible to communicate with millions of people
How do you do that when they dont want to listen?
Then to have them make up their own minds.
Based on the information in the following pages as individuals.

Each page of information outlines a part of an idea.
If you understand the idea, then I encourage you to pass the website on to others,
in the hope that they too will come to understand a very simple truth.
A truth that has always been there, but due to social convention, a truth that is sadly overlooked.
This site is aiming to put the NOW in kNOWledge.
to offer a well known yet misunderstood world view.
TOooo dramatic eh. Not really.


Pluss addressing the recipient as stupid in the title,
will stop most of your readers at that point,
They dont want labels or to be belittled

[The Singing Chef]

Yea, i drove 4 hours this afternoon so pretty similar frame of mid, though politically minded people probably used to reading lots of information it'd probably mean they are less interested as its too much like hard work

That's true, can but hope I guess. So maybe condensing down the text and making more to the point statements?

[Fatt Max]

I believe you need to be congratulated for a thought provoking website that conveys a myriad of ideals, idealism's and various other 'schools' of thought. You have shown yourself to have the guts and motivation to put this out there, small minded tyre kickers and knockers who dont have the balls to do the same can stay by the side of the road.

Well done mate, I will follow this with interest

[mashman]

I opened the page and saw blah blah blah big blocks of text & couldn't be arsed reading into to find out the few basic essential points of what the link was actually all about, so if i cant be arsed why would a political person give any time to bother deciphering it? clicking around i did see something about less law etc which would put most of the politicians out of work so they wont be interested... my 2c

I guess the idea is to get people discussing the topic so that fewer have to read it, as it's an "idea" that can be understood pretty quickly and can be made very much your own very quickly. Praps each page should have a stripper reading the text hmmmmmmmmmm.

Maybe some more visual aids wouldn't go astray, even just a picture of something vaugely resembling what you are talking about as it is a lot of text.

Will find some piccies of dying or dead kids, that seems to work for a nano second or two . I was trying to stay away from piccies to keep the pages shorter, but I get what you mean. Pics and sound bites?

Agree with the second post, read a little of the first page,
boring as, nothing new here,
also not exciting

I was trying to stay away from lesbos and tits tits tits ... I fully agree that it isn't a sexy topic and there are very few ways to sex up living without money... I thought the pages were quite short as I could read them in under 5 mins and that's saying something

[Red39]

Phew, this has been a long time comin...must be a load off will have a good read of it in the a.m. when my brain pretends to function. Well done Mashy

[mashman]

I believe you need to be congratulated for a thought provoking website that conveys a myriad of ideals, idealism's and various other 'schools' of thought. You have shown yourself to have the guts and motivation to put this out there, small minded tyre kickers and knockers who dont have the balls to do the same can stay by the side of the road.

Well done mate, I will follow this with interest

Cheers FM... I'm too stoopid to give a shit about what people think of me, specially when the idea is about everyone.

[Ender EnZed]

I read the whole thing.

I understand that you like the idea of a moneyless utopia but I still have absolutely no idea how it would (or could) work.

[mashman]

Sorta sumthin like this


What will this website try to convey?
It's pretty straight forwards really and whilst it's easier to communicate verbally,
it's nigh on impossible to communicate with millions of people
How do you do that when they dont want to listen?
Then to have them make up their own minds.
Based on the information in the following pages as individuals.

Each page of information outlines a part of an idea.
If you understand the idea, then I encourage you to pass the website on to others,
in the hope that they too will come to understand a very simple truth.
A truth that has always been there, but due to social convention, a truth that is sadly overlooked.
This site is aiming to put the NOW in kNOWledge.
to offer a well known yet misunderstood world view.
TOooo dramatic eh. Not really.


Pluss addressing the recipient as stupid in the title,
will stop most of your readers at that point,
They dont want labels or to be belittled

I see where you're going with that and that's sort of how the site started , but it didn't really convey the idea I thought... an oversight perhaps, but I am too close to the subject. The stoopid isn't aimed at the reader, but I'll change it coz I see why it might seem that way.

[mashman]

I guess the "main" pages are the NOW and Benefits pages. NOW as in how it will kinda work and Benefits coz it's bulleted and give the benefits of the idea.

[Fatt Max]

Cheers FM... I'm too stoopid to give a shit about what people think of me, specially when the idea is about everyone.

Would disagree, please reword as follows:

Cheers FM you sexy bastard (optional)....I have the courage and conviction to throw up ideas that maybe, just maybe, all of us can benefit or at least be slightly enlightened from. But hey, this is KB where you can even get bollocked for trying to be nice to people.......and FFS never EVER say the word 'respect' on this site in case you get blown out of the water.....

Good work fulla, well done....