My writing

**deanohit** · 28th November 2007, 16:49

Bwahahaha, who you calling boy, boy?

**MSTRS:Me** · 28th November 2007, 16:55

Originally Posted by Mom

Is that your twin brother MSTRS?

Could be. He fell in the tarpot as a baby and we could never find him after that

**Mom** · 28th November 2007, 18:31

Originally Posted by MSTRS

Could be. He fell in the tarpot as a baby and we could never find him after that

ROTFL!.......nearly spat my drink over the keyboard then..........LOL

**007XX** · 29th November 2007, 07:27

Originally Posted by hXc

...He's black. That's scary.

Meh...Where I come from, the community is crammed with people of all races...so I grew up with african blacks, native blacks, vietnamese, italian, algerian....
Colour doesn't really enter the equation, so what else you got?

Originally Posted by MSTRS

This scary enough. The image, that is. It bears a remarkable resemblance

Well, you know what they say: "once you go black...."

**MSTRS:Me** · 29th November 2007, 07:53

Originally Posted by 007XX

Well, you know what they say: "once you go black...."

"...you'll wish you hadn't" ??

**007XX** · 29th November 2007, 08:00

Originally Posted by MSTRS

"...you'll wish you hadn't" ??

Either that, or: "...the feeling will return!"

(if you haven't already, watch "White Chicks" with the Wyan Brothers...absolutely hilarious!)

**hXc** · 15th December 2007, 17:10

Holding Us In
I'll keep singing along
The words to all your stupid songs.
Yeah, I'll sink or swim.
Our skin isn't holding us in.

I'll scream along
The things I've thought were oh so wrong.
But I notice now, I see somehow,
I am not weak, I'm getting strong.

**Colapop** · 15th December 2007, 19:45

You are my peom speak

I spake my words of jest
The rhyme and rhythm of mirth
I spake my words of jest
You laugh and smile eyes twinkle
I spake my words of jest
A warmth wrapped heart of love

You are my peom speak
Of jest I only hinted
You are my peom speak
To take my words as given
You are my peom speak
I spake my words of jest

**necrolyte** · 15th December 2007, 20:43

Here's a soppy one for ya'll

I don't know
How you feel
I don't know
If you do

I wish i knew
Just how you feel
I wish i knew
If it was true

The feelings i have
I have for you
The feelings i've got
They are for you

You give no clue
To how you are feeling
It makes it hard to know
If its true

So please just tell me
If you feel
Please just tell me
If you feel like i do

But i don't know
How you feel
And i don't know
If you do

**hXc** · 18th December 2007, 20:46

About Human Nature

I'm no longer certain of what I am told
Because the fairy tale can't be fact.

But it's nice thinking
Because nobody can do what 'everybody' wants.

Sometimes all I have are sad dreams.

All around me there are wooden men who hate each other and have corks in their ears.
And all of them think they are made of plastic.
I'd love to believe one of them but I don't want to be
Made out of wood.

A lot of people will be disappointed
When I admit that sometimes all I have are
Sad dreams
About human nature.

Sounds A Bit Like Muse

Gag yourself with fear because your speech
Will not be safe.
Whatever you do,
Don't have an opinion
Don't take sides.
Just live a life of apathy and
Smile with the rest of them in what you know
Is Brain-death.

**deanohit** · 18th December 2007, 21:40

Originally Posted by hXc

About Human Nature

Nice one man.

**hXc** · 18th December 2007, 21:43

Cheers. I'm somewhat fascinated by "All around me there are wooden men who hate each other and have corks in their ears." I have no clue why, but for me, it's just an awesome piece of writing. It may not be very poetic, or very complex writing, but how it fits/doesn't fit into the rest of the poem is what makes it for me.