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    Powerful you have become, the dark side I sense in you.
    "Standing on your mother's corpse you told me that you'd wait forever." [Bryan Adams: Summer of 69]

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    Merci mon ami.

    Your thanks in stride I will take.

    Peace hath higher tests of manhood

    than battle ever knew.

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    Nice to see you haven't forgotten us....interesting stuff!
    Diarrhoea is hereditary - it runs in your jeans

    If my nose was running money, I'd blow it all on you...

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    An interesting person I am, dear mother. And forget you, never shall I do.

    Peace hath higher tests of manhood

    than battle ever knew.

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    Something different. Very very different in my eyes.
    Quite possibly the longest time I've ever worked on something would be for this. It's for somebody, but who I shall not reveal (Not Bob Dylan). Hope you enjoy some very extensive wordplay and odd things.
    The title will be changed as at the moment I have no idea what to call it except this, but it's not staying. Any suggestions?

    Bob Dylan's French Kiss


    Bob Dylan's french kiss
    mixed with plastic soda
    and beans.
    Drinking solid newspaper jeans; young girl wants
    to be inside the scream.

    Fade to colour, the scene turns black.
    Attack of the bees; honey singing
    to the cows.
    I want to be your make up girl; we can
    sing until the sun blows pearls, said she.

    Bubbles blowing the doors of candles;
    music flames for our butterflies.
    Wear the note and the french kiss
    dances from the moonlight
    of your tongue.

    Restless angels. Love's arrows.
    Swing to me again and tangle the breeze.
    Butter meets the melt, heat for the present day.
    Summer hot babes, but your tongue is born
    to rain.

    I want to be the shampoo
    between your french kiss,
    young blood and perfume.
    Fresh night moon shining under
    the black sweet truth.

    Two blue shoes on your last history feet.
    Walk on the sun and listen to your heart
    beating spots of tragic age
    or a sweet voice bless us and we know
    the last ride home is you.

    Peace hath higher tests of manhood

    than battle ever knew.

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    That is very different to your usual stuff.....are you sure you're not turning emo on us?.....
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    That's far from emo mumsy. No need to worry.

    Peace hath higher tests of manhood

    than battle ever knew.

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