Der Über Mormon few

[Quasievil]

Icehouse was good.

[Sidewinder]

Icehouse was good.

so was the pub half way

[ManDownUnder]

Seriously - make notes on what you're going to say (which I think you did)... and say it out loud... on your own in a room where no-one can hear you.

Make it interesting, inflection in your voice - engage the audience... because the intro killed it.

The rest I quite enjoyed.

[sinfull]

Make it interesting, inflection in your voice - engage the audience... because the intro killed it.

Yeah next time ya wanna have a translappa do the intro !!!

[bogan]

Seriously - make notes on what you're going to say (which I think you did)... and say it out loud... on your own in a room where no-one can hear you.

Make it interesting, inflection in your voice - engage the audience... because the intro killed it.

The rest I quite enjoyed.

agreed, notes at most, definetly not a script though, you cud try just going for a fang on it get off, spout whatever shit comes to mind

[Sidewinder]

Yeah next time ya wanna have a translappa do the intro !!!

yea i just needed some piss and i would of been fine, but always ride sober.......

[Sidewinder]

agreed, notes at most, definetly not a script though, you cud try just going for a fang on it get off, spout whatever shit comes to mind

yea bascily what ever shit did just come to mind tho

[98tls]

Seriously - make notes on what you're going to say (which I think you did)... and say it out loud... on your own in a room where no-one can hear you.

Make it interesting, inflection in your voice - engage the audience... because the intro killed it.

The rest I quite enjoyed.

What he said sort of,fwiw pretty well done,clicked the go button thinking "here we go" but to be honest watched it till the end,nice bike,nice roads,nice riding,not to mention being an old cunt love Icehouse.To sum up 7/10
.Well done.

[bogan]

yea bascily what ever shit did just come to mind tho

ah well, you can only get better from here lucky buggers getting to test all these new bikes

[Insanity_rules]

omg what am i on about???

You tell us and we'll all know!

[ManDownUnder]

agreed, notes at most, definetly not a script though

Exactly right. Know what your going to say, and say what you know. Don't do it word for word though - that just doesn't work, and it's hard work.

you cud try just going for a fang on it get off, spout whatever shit comes to mind

Na - That takes a lot of practice to attempt, and even then you need to hit your marks - topic areas to cover, order of presentation and wrap up/call to action at the end of it.

"Having a go" comes across as exactly that - which is what we saw.

[paddy]

let me know what ya think!

1) Firstly, I love the head wobble right after the skid at the end. Brilliant.

2) I think you guys are actually quite good a making these things. The framing is good, the tracking shots are set up well. The transitions are excellent. The overall feel is good too. There are a couple of things that let it down a little though: Camera stability. You should consider buying a HEAVY tripod. And the dialogue at the beginning. I think you make good directors/cameramen but you definitely not actors or script writers. Either work on or ditch the dialogue. It definitely takes away from the rest. Having said that, Carver seemed fairly natural on camera in the two talking segments towards the end.

3) I know you guys seem to cop a lot of flack on KB and I don't really know you from a bar of soap, but with the exception of the beginning I actually enjoyed watching that. Thanks. (It helps that I am trying to figure out how to ride on gravel at the moment - you should consider some instructional videos. Maybe something like MCN on YouTube - if I'm remembering the acronym right.)

P.

[paddy]

Exactly right. Know what your going to say, and say what you know. Don't do it word for word though - that just doesn't work, and it's hard work.



Na - That takes a lot of practice to attempt, and even then you need to hit your marks - topic areas to cover, order of presentation and wrap up/call to action at the end of it.

"Having a go" comes across as exactly that - which is what we saw.

+1

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[bogan]

Exactly right. Know what your going to say, and say what you know. Don't do it word for word though - that just doesn't work, and it's hard work.



Na - That takes a lot of practice to attempt, and even then you need to hit your marks - topic areas to cover, order of presentation and wrap up/call to action at the end of it.

"Having a go" comes across as exactly that - which is what we saw.

hmm, yeh good point, though having a fang beforehand may give you confidence/settle the nerves so a prepared dialogue will come across better

[ManDownUnder]

hmm, yeh good point, though having a fang beforehand may give you confidence/settle the nerves so a prepared dialogue will come across better

Oh shit yes - within reason it'd help the spontenaity and excitement of it - all engages the audience. Too much would push the presenter into "uber exited" though - beyond professional into bouncy and silly.