Acc rip off petition

[short-circuit]

No error. One of the cuts is for payouts on injuries sustained in the course of a criminal act. Most of us accept that is not right to give that Burton prick a $10,000 titanium leg. Let him make his own from a broomstick or something.

Ok in that case you need to provide the context for that statement...but remember it is your opinion and not a fact.

IMO you would be better off sticking to facts

[telliman]

just pay your levys you tight arses, if ya dont like it change ya bike, simple!

[Ixion]

Is better, but as a random public, I still have to read half way through before I find what relates to me

suggest put the "You will pay.." bits at the top.

[MSTRS:Me]

Is this better?

[Ixion]

Yes . that's good. (only suggestion is maybe the words "It's you" after "We now know").

As random public I glance at that skim read it and straight away see stuff that makes me say "Whoa - what's this about". Go with that

[pipson]

Dont forget we need to print these petitions out & get signed over xmas by your family & work mates at the xmas piss up.