Its great that your taking the initiative to do something about this. I'm sick of having to ride like I know that someone is out to get me.
Few things though.
Like Conquizator
(?) said, you need to make it more captivating. If you send it to the LTNZ/NZTA they'll read it, but that it because they are obliged to. But for people like us, If you lose our attention, like happened to me 3/4 of the way through, its a fail. Keep at it
Add footnotes. Show all of your sources at the bottom, and citate all of them as well. This show that you arent making only generalisations, but are backing up with facts.
Just a personal thing here, but a few days ago I saw a Learner driver in a 4L BMW. What is stopping people from hopping in a 8L Ferrari and driving away. Theres nothing. My bike is a single cylinder GN250. My car is a 1.5L Honda Civic. Why? Because I have the common sense to not go beyond my boundaries too quickly. Hell, when you have to do a multiple choie test to get your 1L, The only thing that I can see stopping someone from getting a Ferrari is the insurance premium

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