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    This is what happens when Luke gets bored



    I decided I would make an intro for my future videos

    ---WARNING---

    this is pretty low quality so feel free to rip in to it on here but also give feedback on how I can improve it criticism is always welcome
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    Could just be me, but a catchier tune (or at least starting the song later in the track) and some firmer ground to walk on would make a big improvement (looking down every couple of steps kinda throws it off)
    There's nothing more exhilarating than pointing out the shortcomings of others, is there? -Clerks

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    Video needed girls or a bike.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ZeroIndex View Post
    Could just be me, but a catchier tune (or at least starting the song later in the track) and some firmer ground to walk on would make a big improvement (looking down every couple of steps kinda throws it off)
    Needs a spacesuit.

    I looks like he is walking back to his spacecraft from an old Star Trek episode.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BoristheBiter View Post
    Needs a spacesuit.

    I looks like he is walking back to his spacecraft from an old Star Trek episode.
    so, so true
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    bit of colour correction and grading would help, but has potential

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    My mother always told me "If you have not got anything nice to say, do not say anything". But I have never listened to her.
    That was utter crap.
    For a man is a slave to whatever has mastered him. Keep an open mind, just dont let your brains fall out.

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    Quote Originally Posted by unstuck View Post
    My mother always told me "If you have not got anything nice to say, do not say anything". But I have never listened to her.
    That was utter crap.
    ok then, were do you think it needs improving?
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    Quote Originally Posted by EJK View Post
    you shouldnt have expected anything good XD
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    Get a couple of crack whores to lick each other out on the back of a Ducati 1199 and you might have a half decent video.

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    Quote Originally Posted by lukemc1878 View Post
    you shouldnt have expected anything good XD
    Oh, and quoting embedded images will get you a good

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    Quote Originally Posted by SMOKEU View Post
    Get a couple of crack whores to lick each other out on the back of a Ducati 1199 and you might have a half decent video.
    Cheap to set up...

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    Quote Originally Posted by oneblackflag View Post
    Cheap to set up...
    Chch = crack whores.

    Always has, always will.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Berries View Post
    Chch = crack whores.

    Always has, always will.
    just go down manchester street they are everywhere
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