Story - Old Friends

[Lou Girardin]

It seems that not all poets are published, that should be.

[Motu]

'That was terrible,total load of crap!' ...''there were a couple of bits I liked''....'yeah,some bits were ok'....''I quite liked it actualy''....'it wasn't too bad'...''it was awesome,a fantastic story!''...'it was bloody good alright'...''I loved it,I want more!''....'yeah,more,more,we want more'...

[Ms Piggy]

Hmmmmm...since I read your story I've been trying to add to your reputation but it won't let me:spudwhat: ...thanks again anyway.

Maybe the powers that be have decided you have far too much of a reputation!

[James Deuce]

Hmmmmm...since I read your story I've been trying to add to your reputation but it won't let me:spudwhat: ...thanks again anyway.

Maybe the powers that be have decided you have far too much of a reputation!

The universe wishes to maintain Paul's "disreputation".

[Paul in NZ]

The universe wishes to maintain Paul's "disreputation".

Balance in all things grasshopper...

[scumdog]

Hmmm, ya spent too much time in English classes at school!!

"Nice syntax and colourful use of metaphors and the story flowed with only a hint of labouring a couple of times, had a warm feel to it"

[Eddieb]

Wickedly written. Warm fuzzies all round.

[Marknz]

Excellent penmanship... now

[vifferman]

Lovely story, Paul.

Although I've ridden the roads you described only a few times, your prose brought the memories of them flooding back.

Well done, Mate.

[Hitcher]

Now try telling that story using only smilies and TXT! Ain't English wonderful the way it lets you used properly spelled joined-up words to tell stories that move and excite!

[FzerozeroT]

I'll have to get the missus to read that, cause I think it sums up male bonding perfectly. funnily enough i remember the same roads with a mate, both on nifty fiftys